Another frickin' week has past and I need to fame-whore another project for you guys. Like I said before, not all my reviews will be highlighting the best projects so beware. Today we have The Lovely And Broken, its a stardoll TV show series (like Chronicles of Cora, Diamonds Are Forever, Samantha King and etc). In it's second episode, so far so good.
Who?
Riding solo, hevascore234 is working on this project on her alone. From the writing, to graphics, to the poor advertising. If I were her, I'd at least get someone to do the graphics. Because her graphic is a little reoccurring if you know what I mean....
She uses it here,
here,
and here.
What?This is the part when I tell you all about the project I'm featuring. Unfortunately, due to her poor blog layout skills. Hevascore234 has no 'About Us' tab or any tab in general. So I'm just going to wing it, basically this story is about a 17-year-old girl who was living with her mom until they got into a heated argument. Tiffany (the 17-year-old girl), lost her dad in a fire/car crash and is emotionally and physically harmed by the experience. Joanne, Tiffany's mother, blames the crash on Tiffany since she was in the car with her father. Tiffany runs away from home and finds herself living the life of a hobo, sleeping on the pavement in front of a shop. The shop owner thinks she is
A picture of someone incapable of raping you, Justin Bieber.
When?
The Lovely And Broken is about one month old. And has less followers than even Reece's 300 projects get. Currently at 2 followers and 260 page views. These are some depressing stats. So please help the girl out a bit and follow her blog. I remember when I had less than 10 followers on my blog, it sucked monkey balls.... The most comments she's gotten on a post is three, and one of the comments were from herself.
lmfao is right, this is a pity you guise.
Side-Comments?
I know it may seem like I'm bitching about the project. But really, its actually not that bad of a project. Aside from the bad background, tasteless head banner and unfitting show title, its great. Honestly. The first episode throw me off a bit, but I generally liked it. At first I though Tiffany's dad died in a fire, but in reality it was an explosion. Then her mother smokes, drinks and expects to be served breakfast like a princess. Tiffany defiantly has life at its worst. Another thing that got me off was the punctuation. Its one of my pointless pet peeves because everyone learns how to write differently. With that all being said, y'all should follow this blog. The story line and writing is really good, plus anything is better than two followers and its worth it. I promise.
Rating: 
(2.7)
(2.7)
48 comments:
I agree with lulla96
There's a ton of spelling mistakes in this post. I would recommend using spell check ^^ Aside from that, it's a pretty good idea but like you said, the layout and graphics are not really up to par for it. The story is a little predictable but let's just see where it goes.
Yeah, its just for fun. I don't expect it to be a big topic, I just do it for fun like I said. I make the graphics, because I don't have good editing program, lol. But I don't expect it to be a massive project. So yeah.
the blogs been removed for some reason...
i wanna read it though!
I deleted it because I felt embarrassed. I may open it again, but I don't know. This review has totally put me off.
THATS IS THE MOST STUPIDIEST DUMBEST PEICE OF POO I'VE EVER HERAD IN MY LIFE! YOUR BLOGS RUBBISH AND YOU DON'T SEE PEOPLE SAYING THAT! DO YOU? NOW SO YOUR GRAPHICS ARE POOR YOUR BACKGROUNDS POOR! HOW DO YOU FFEL!
Hi There I Felt Really Bad Reading This Because It Was About My Friend! I Personally Don't Think There's Nothing Wrong With The Blog, Ther's No Need To Feel Embarresed. And Who Ever Posted Above. I Agree But You Could Of Said It In A WHOLE LOT NICER way! Like Seriously!
I think there was a better way to introduce this blog/story. If the girl liked writing and did it for her own joy, not for popularity, then you should leave it and her alone, noo?
I see no point in making these kind of posts and embarrassing people... It's just very rude and cruel.
dl.eclipse
I'm sure you all would have rather had her review it than me. I'd have much, much more to say about it...
I suggest hiring a graphic designer for starters.
Its like you guys read everything else but the "side-comment" part of the post. I did say good things about the blog. And not all reviews can be sugar and rainbows. "I know it may seem like I'm bitching about the project. But really, its actually not that bad of a project." -myself. And I don't care if my blogs are shit, they're for my followers and myselfs enjoyment. Hevascore234 should realize that too, deleting it was pointless. You could have gained more readers to enjoy your WORK like I did. And theres nothing to be embarrassed about it. Honestly.
And the antagonist is right, she/he would have been ruthless. I was just being a critique.
@Katie - Thanks,..
@Pandora J - Thanks.
I don't want this to turn into a big thing. I've deleted it, who knows? Maybe I will put it up again.
It's embarrassing because I didn't think my blog would end up on a gossip website? And the review points out all the flaws in my blog? Look, this review was pointless, in my opinion. But its finished. I've deleted the blog so there's nothing more to talk about.
This is my opinion.
@Supa_Star4real
I know, I know. It's just I really didn't think my blog would end up on Stardoll's Biggest Gossip website.
Anyway, thanks..
@hevascore234
Don't let others put you down. Although I think the blog needs a graphic designer and an layout update, it has potential. Keep working hard sweetheart! :)
@Fiorama/Tinsley :Thankyou so much :)
This review was really blunt and you didn't really balance it out by saying what you liked it. You whored out a selfless girls small project and made her look like a pathetic fool. Heather (I think that's her name lol) is actually really sweet and nice and I think her project could be really interesting, but thanks to you she has suspended it. Who knows how popular this could have got? You have ruined a perfectly good possibly iconic project. Congratulations.
Stfu jack ur the biggest hypocrite of them all. Ur just trying to make friends so people will forget that they hate u for all the terrible things u have done.
@Jack: Yeah that's my name lol :]
All of you are stupid.
Ugly barbies.
I think you should not be embarrassed of your blog, hevascore234. It's pretty cool, actually. Who cares if graphic isn't perfect. Nothing is. :)
Thanks, and I've asked a graphic designer to make me one, but idk. So yeah.. thanks!
Well, I am not that good at judging graphics but I think hers is really beautiful! The story also sounds good!
Maria/mgirl07
Thank-you!
@Jack, thanks bro.
And ftw, she brought it back. So you can stop bitchin' and just read her got dayum story already. You'll like it.
Is it just me, or is everyone suddenly becoming a lot nicer? lol -drinks tea-
@Sofi
lol
@Hevascore234-
The dumbest thing about this is that you didn't consider that this review would be the best opportunity to gain publicity for your blog. No, the blog wasn't the greatest but it was a unique idea with potential. No one will ever take your projects seriously if they think you depend so much on the opinions of others.
@ebony its true!! I got possibly over 700 veiws on my blog cause of this blog, its very helpful!
@Ebony;
I know that, it was just a shock to see it on this blog. That's all.
@hevascore234
with all attention grabbing you need to be up front, starting a project your layout etc should have been flashy etc.
from the header the medoll doesnt look very broken and from the review you quickly demolished any thoughts that the beginning of the story was lovely.
why dont you hire a graphic designer, put together a design team, and maybe get some kind of publicist and get partners or whatever their called where they will put their logo on their blog if you do the same.
@Saskia
I've asked someone to make me a graphic, but I don't know when they'll get back to me. And yeah I didn't expect this to be a big project, so I didn't spend so much time on the layout.
@Saskia
Why would she do all that if this ws all just for fun and she didn't really want people to get more readers for her? Your pulling this way out of proportion.
It's not that serious of a blog so stop trying to make it so serious.
You guys are such babies.You too Heather or whatever your name is.This post is not embarrassing at all.She pointed out some flaws you know you guys do it so why talk about it now.I don't like the episodes simply because she's trying to get to the main part too fast,the second episode isn't even realistic.But anyway she does need a graphic designer,and?There was no need to take it down at the point you did.What they said it's not even too serious but if you do want views and followers you need something to catch their attention.And what you took it down because of embarrassment I thought it was for the joy of you?That's a bit hypocritical.
@Vital
it may not have been a serious thing but when I do things I like them to be better than I expected. Not once did I say Heather didnt work hard on what she did but in my opinion when you start something new and want it to get views (even a small amount) it should have a certain aura about it because later down the line when owners of blogs see that their blogs arent getting as many views as they would want they shut down, leaving the people actually reading all annoyed (e.g ICON -_-)
it was only a suggestion, I geuss different people do different things different ways.
This post made my vagina hurt lol
@Anon : I couldn't give two shits about what you think. You probably wouldn't even have the balls to say that to my face?
WHOO GO HEATHER WHOO UM HUM YEAHHH! WHOO! you go qurrl! guess wh?!
@My post above, I meant Ashleigh
l'm not gonna go find you and say it to your face in technical terms,dearie.But You'll see my gb comment hunnie -Ashleigh
http://gossipgirlforstardoll.blogspot.com/2012/01/its-dog-eat-dog-world-out-there.html
funniest post ever in the link above!
That blog sucks. It's just a wannabe Antagonist and all the writer talks about is things no one even cares about. That's not gossip it is just them ranting about how terrible everything is. That post wasnt funny at all it was very rude. Nice try though.
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